I've only just started reading this, but it appears to need major editing. On the first page alone I found about 4 spelling mistakes, which makes it difficult to read.
If you really want to read this now then go ahead, if you can wait for a revised edit, then that might be a good idea. :)
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If you really want to read this now then go ahead, if you can wait for a revised edit, then that might be a good idea. :)